Shit. Bloody hell. From the moment Arthur looked through the window, I was half-grinning at the bad-ass move he was clearly going to make and then half thinking that wow, you are an amazing writer, because I was wondering how the hell you could get Eames to see a flying Arthur when clearly he couldn't be flying! But you managed it and made it all so believable. (Heh, okay, so I just realised that I'm not very coherent at the moment. Just chalk it up to your amazing writing that has me floored.)
Btw, Cobb & Ariadne's reactions were spot-on.
Ok, so almost losing consciousness isn't good in the least, but it's Arthur, so surely he won't give up due to a lil' thing like a concussion, right? Right?! Especially since he's not in the best position to recover from such injuries.
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Date: 2010-12-31 12:55 am (UTC)Btw, Cobb & Ariadne's reactions were spot-on.
Ok, so almost losing consciousness isn't good in the least, but it's Arthur, so surely he won't give up due to a lil' thing like a concussion, right? Right?! Especially since he's not in the best position to recover from such injuries.
*Rushes off to read some more*.