Date: 2011-04-07 08:35 pm (UTC)
This chapter really provides a good look into Jack and Ann. I actually feel bad for them while hating them. XD But I am so glad they're out of the way for now! Arthur and Eames need to make up. I loved the on-the-roof part SO MUCH! Thank you for providing a realistic, non-action-movie interpretation. I also have a soft spot for Eames's actual legitimate fear. It's very refreshing to be reminded that the characters, while being BAMFy, are still mortal and human. :DDD

Can't wait for the next chapter!

PS. - I'd forgotten about the suggestion of Ann killing Jack, but I'm glad you did include it in the end, because it adds parallelism with the beginning. I am such a sucker for circles. XD
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