"He probably looked exactly like a man who had ridden on the top of a train with his legs hanging off, as it went past a motherfucking cliff."
This is an amazing visual. Bewildered, disheveled, and scared almost to death, Eames.
I love that he's all "Fuck off, I could have died! Well, buck up, gotta carry on, Arthur needs me!"
And you got the ankle bit in! I'm so happy!
Grade A h/c you have here with both parties going through hardships. And the hair, tabi, I love it! I love that it's wet too. I can so picture them in bed together all desperate but cuddly.
Can I make another suggestion? I don't know if you are still taking them. But I like the idea of one of them waking to hot breath on their neck. But idk, it's obviously near the end so it's getting harder to suggest things.
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Date: 2011-04-08 05:43 am (UTC)This is an amazing visual. Bewildered, disheveled, and scared almost to death, Eames.
I love that he's all "Fuck off, I could have died! Well, buck up, gotta carry on, Arthur needs me!"
And you got the ankle bit in! I'm so happy!
Grade A h/c you have here with both parties going through hardships. And the hair, tabi, I love it! I love that it's wet too. I can so picture them in bed together all desperate but cuddly.
Can I make another suggestion? I don't know if you are still taking them. But I like the idea of one of them waking to hot breath on their neck. But idk, it's obviously near the end so it's getting harder to suggest things.