SO happy to read your comments, as always! I have posted the next chapter and hopefully gone a little deeper into some of the things you're mentioning here: what Arthur is thinking, the motives of the bad guys, etc.
It feels more like your own creation right now.
This is the most awesome thing I could hear about this, about fanfiction. Because I loved the movie, I felt the ideas had so much to offer, and I think that this is where fanfiction comes in. And because I'm always so wary of OCs in general, that to hear that ones I've had to use are adding to the story rather than taking away, that means a lot to me.
I put in her reaction to Arthur being alive in the next chapter (which is posted up.) It's brief, but I hope I put a lot of meaning and intensity into it. I really hope you like it. :D
And as always, thank you for your thoughtful comments! ^_^
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Date: 2011-04-11 08:17 pm (UTC)It feels more like your own creation right now.
This is the most awesome thing I could hear about this, about fanfiction. Because I loved the movie, I felt the ideas had so much to offer, and I think that this is where fanfiction comes in. And because I'm always so wary of OCs in general, that to hear that ones I've had to use are adding to the story rather than taking away, that means a lot to me.
I put in her reaction to Arthur being alive in the next chapter (which is posted up.) It's brief, but I hope I put a lot of meaning and intensity into it. I really hope you like it. :D
And as always, thank you for your thoughtful comments! ^_^