First of all I love this chapter, truly. Second thing, before I'll forgot, I really like sparrow_hubris idea. Even though I have no cle, who this partner could be. But coming back to this chapter: it's everything I expected and much, much more. This whole secret standing behind the misterious group, Arthur's lost memories, strange familiarity of Dinclusin's touch... The last one is a creepy one, it feels wrong somehow. So yeah, everything is vague, full of misteries and secrets, which I personally love. I'm sure only that all of this doesn't mean anything nice and good. There must be a reason why memories were wiped away (by who? Because I'm sure that no by Dinclusin and his "band") and this reason is most probably not very pleasant one. All in all: the best of your stories so far for me is "Glitch", but this one can be the second favorite, It isn't yet, but it is closer with every posted chapter. So just keep going. Waiting as impatiently for next chapter, as always.
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Date: 2011-03-17 09:54 pm (UTC)But coming back to this chapter: it's everything I expected and much, much more. This whole secret standing behind the misterious group, Arthur's lost memories, strange familiarity of Dinclusin's touch... The last one is a creepy one, it feels wrong somehow.
So yeah, everything is vague, full of misteries and secrets, which I personally love. I'm sure only that all of this doesn't mean anything nice and good. There must be a reason why memories were wiped away (by who? Because I'm sure that no by Dinclusin and his "band") and this reason is most probably not very pleasant one.
All in all: the best of your stories so far for me is "Glitch", but this one can be the second favorite, It isn't yet, but it is closer with every posted chapter. So just keep going.
Waiting as impatiently for next chapter, as always.