OKAY SO. maybe it's because I'm a totally corrupted slasher now but. BUT. were you trying to make it seem like Eames and Jack used to be a thing?? because if that's true this adds a whole new UNIVERSE of creepy and terrible to Jack. and I love it.
I am very glad to hear that. I'm not sure if I'm trying to humanize him in the next chapter, or make him creepier or both. But he's got to somehow get into Eames's head and I need for him to find a way in there.
I think Jack and Eames were a thing. I'm so set on this.
*copy/paste* Thank you for, like, an entire section of chapter, here. ^_^
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Date: 2011-03-21 04:05 am (UTC)I am very glad to hear that. I'm not sure if I'm trying to humanize him in the next chapter, or make him creepier or both. But he's got to somehow get into Eames's head and I need for him to find a way in there.
I think Jack and Eames were a thing. I'm so set on this.
*copy/paste* Thank you for, like, an entire section of chapter, here. ^_^