Holy shit, this is amazing. I've read most of your other fics, I think (haven't managed to get to Glitch yet) but I love love love the way you subtly work them into this one. I'm usually pretty bad about commenting- sometimes I feel inadequate when compared to the eloquence of others, lol- but I really couldn't let this one go by without saying anything.
MICHELLE. She's nosy and impertinent and all-around lovely. Her interactions with Arthur and (especially) Eames are some of the highlights of this story for me.
Hahaha it must suck to have taken a bullet for the man you love, only to realise that he had no clue. Poor Eames was so disgruntled, "WTF do you mean you don't remember? That shit hurt!"
Last but certainly not least, that dream. There were chills running down my back while I read that part... so creepy, and I was getting really anxious. So naturally, that's where it ended. Cliff-hangers are really a specialty of yours, aren't they?
/tl;dr, gushing hearts and rainbows from every orif- Well. Gushing hearts and rainbows. Yeah. ♥
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Date: 2011-03-14 01:12 am (UTC)MICHELLE. She's nosy and impertinent and all-around lovely. Her interactions with Arthur and (especially) Eames are some of the highlights of this story for me.
Hahaha it must suck to have taken a bullet for the man you love, only to realise that he had no clue. Poor Eames was so disgruntled, "WTF do you mean you don't remember? That shit hurt!"
Last but certainly not least, that dream. There were chills running down my back while I read that part... so creepy, and I was getting really anxious. So naturally, that's where it ended. Cliff-hangers are really a specialty of yours, aren't they?
/tl;dr, gushing hearts and rainbows from every orif-
Well. Gushing hearts and rainbows. Yeah. ♥