PLEASE never stop. These stories you weave are just too good and fill me with too much glee.
THIS: Eames leaned in and kissed him, running his thumb across his jaw. "I did know," he said against his mouth. "And you must know that I love you, Arthur. I took a bullet for you, didn't I." *dies*
AND OMG you were able to fit it in and it's wonderful:But there is one thing that I keep going back to and it's always been you. There is only one Arthur.
I nearly squeed like the stupid fangirl that I am! :D
Oh and you were able to add in a call to Cobb *nods in approval* I really liked that. I like Cobb cameos!
I was just re-watched the movie recently and the scene with Cobb and Eames when Cobb goes to Mombasa to see him is one of my favorites...anyway I was just thinking about how Eames said he and his team tried to perform inception before and it didn't take and I thought: "That is a really interesting fact/backstory on him. I wonder if anyone wrote any fic delving into that?" HA! And now you're including it! I love it! I absolutely love it! Please run with that idea! :D
Having Michelle with Eames during the "danger" also sounds great!
This mysterious stuff about Dinclusion and Ann is really freaky and intriguing!
I love the direction you're taking it in and I love we're learning more about Eames' past and the fact that someone performed inception on him is priceless! I love that he can't steal anything!
I also think, after reading a few of your other fics, that Arthur and Eames' relationship is developing, growing, getting stronger and overall evolving and it's really quite refreshing to read that. I really, really like that and if it evolves even more I will be extremely happy. :)
I don't know if I have any suggestions for you this time around. Just keep doing what you're doing! You're doing an awesome job.
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I love your writing.
PLEASE never stop. These stories you weave are just too good and fill me with too much glee.
THIS: Eames leaned in and kissed him, running his thumb across his jaw. "I did know," he said against his mouth. "And you must know that I love you, Arthur. I took a bullet for you, didn't I." *dies*
AND OMG you were able to fit it in and it's wonderful:But there is one thing that I keep going back to and it's always been you. There is only one Arthur.
I nearly squeed like the stupid fangirl that I am! :D
Oh and you were able to add in a call to Cobb *nods in approval* I really liked that. I like Cobb cameos!
I was just re-watched the movie recently and the scene with Cobb and Eames when Cobb goes to Mombasa to see him is one of my favorites...anyway I was just thinking about how Eames said he and his team tried to perform inception before and it didn't take and I thought: "That is a really interesting fact/backstory on him. I wonder if anyone wrote any fic delving into that?" HA! And now you're including it! I love it! I absolutely love it! Please run with that idea! :D
Having Michelle with Eames during the "danger" also sounds great!
This mysterious stuff about Dinclusion and Ann is really freaky and intriguing!
I love the direction you're taking it in and I love we're learning more about Eames' past and the fact that someone performed inception on him is priceless! I love that he can't steal anything!
I also think, after reading a few of your other fics, that Arthur and Eames' relationship is developing, growing, getting stronger and overall evolving and it's really quite refreshing to read that. I really, really like that and if it evolves even more I will be extremely happy. :)
I don't know if I have any suggestions for you this time around. Just keep doing what you're doing! You're doing an awesome job.