I love everything about this fic! I'm so enthralled! This line: "...he stares at you the way people stare at the Mona Lisa when the see it at the Louvre." YES. SO MUCH YES. And your attention to canon detail, dear Lord; I almost swooned when I read about Arthur's voice cracking! It totally does! And it gets me every time in the movie! You rock!
I love that Eames's failed inception is the basis for this. I never even thought of that, ha ha, even though everyone was saying it was Eames's past that caused this. Wow. So good. As for what he was trying to do... Well, I'm thinking after this that both Dinclusin and Dromalius are actually supernatural, as their names would suggest. Perhaps Eames's failed inception was against a follower of one of theirs? Perhaps he was attempting to stop someone from carrying out their orders?
I think it would be awesome for Michelle to be with Eames. I love the relationship she's making with Arthur and Eames. But I also love that you have prickly Eames, who doesn't care at all for children but can still act like he does. I like that dynamic. So maybe Michelle will have to prove herself outside of Eames's patronizing view of her? Maybe she steps in to try and protect him?
The scary black hole dream... *brrr* I really can't wait to see what you come up with next!!
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Date: 2011-03-14 05:16 am (UTC)I love that Eames's failed inception is the basis for this. I never even thought of that, ha ha, even though everyone was saying it was Eames's past that caused this. Wow. So good. As for what he was trying to do... Well, I'm thinking after this that both Dinclusin and Dromalius are actually supernatural, as their names would suggest. Perhaps Eames's failed inception was against a follower of one of theirs? Perhaps he was attempting to stop someone from carrying out their orders?
I think it would be awesome for Michelle to be with Eames. I love the relationship she's making with Arthur and Eames. But I also love that you have prickly Eames, who doesn't care at all for children but can still act like he does. I like that dynamic. So maybe Michelle will have to prove herself outside of Eames's patronizing view of her? Maybe she steps in to try and protect him?
The scary black hole dream... *brrr* I really can't wait to see what you come up with next!!