Oh, I see that I should read all the comments not only an accident one. Luckily I've read one of your answers, Tabi, the one with the idea of Arthur being the mark of failed inception and the only thing I can say it's YES. Yes, go for it! It would be AMAZING I'm sure about it. And it can change a lot of in their relationship. I mean I love them feeling so good with each other, but it seems that I thirsty for some drama. IDK why, really, it must be the weather:) Hmm, I think that this idea, which someone wanted to plant in Arthur's mind should be connected with the dream sharing; Arthur worked with Dom and Mal from the beginning, right? (I mean in your version)If so he could become a powerful aliance for someone outside of the legal dream sharing- all secrets about the PASIV (in my mind there is plenty versions of this device), sedatives, generally information what you can do and how... Anything. The way I see it: Mal has rather strong influence on Arthur, right? So she forced him to finally go somewhere, meet some beautiful girl/boy/whatever. Obviously all of this happen during this short vacation, but it leaves my with one serious question: whe Eames didn't recognize him as his mark? Anyway, probably it can be explained somehow and I really like that idea. I also can see Arthur standing on the middle of old city centre in Cracow, squinting his eyes in the brightness of sunlight... Yeah, it's my patriotism, which woke up:) Another YES for Michelle being with Eames during the danger. She's the type of girl, who won't seat in her room, especially not after somebody told her to do so. The darkness in Arthur's dream- creepy,oh so creepy. For me it looks like some kind of self defence, much better than anything Arthur could see before. So, that's it for my ideas. Now I can say that this story is really, really good. I'm so happy you enjoy writing and sharing your amazing ideas with us! As for the mirror- you can't even imagine how big my smile was when I discovered that a simple prompt has developed into something much bigger and complicated. I'm waiting impatiently for next chapter and the DANGER;D
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Date: 2011-03-14 03:38 pm (UTC)Hmm, I think that this idea, which someone wanted to plant in Arthur's mind should be connected with the dream sharing; Arthur worked with Dom and Mal from the beginning, right? (I mean in your version)If so he could become a powerful aliance for someone outside of the legal dream sharing- all secrets about the PASIV (in my mind there is plenty versions of this device), sedatives, generally information what you can do and how... Anything. The way I see it: Mal has rather strong influence on Arthur, right? So she forced him to finally go somewhere, meet some beautiful girl/boy/whatever. Obviously all of this happen during this short vacation, but it leaves my with one serious question: whe Eames didn't recognize him as his mark? Anyway, probably it can be explained somehow and I really like that idea. I also can see Arthur standing on the middle of old city centre in Cracow, squinting his eyes in the brightness of sunlight... Yeah, it's my patriotism, which woke up:)
Another YES for Michelle being with Eames during the danger. She's the type of girl, who won't seat in her room, especially not after somebody told her to do so.
The darkness in Arthur's dream- creepy,oh so creepy. For me it looks like some kind of self defence, much better than anything Arthur could see before.
So, that's it for my ideas. Now I can say that this story is really, really good. I'm so happy you enjoy writing and sharing your amazing ideas with us! As for the mirror- you can't even imagine how big my smile was when I discovered that a simple prompt has developed into something much bigger and complicated.
I'm waiting impatiently for next chapter and the DANGER;D