okay so I just wanted to say that whole last scene scared the living fuck out of me. seriously creepy, this is why I adore you writing x]


i haven't read through the other suggestions for the whole Eames' past thing, but what do you think about putting in some of Dinclusin's past? I don't really know how you'd do it yet, maybe Michelle gets him to talk... or Eames cliffs back despite how scared he is just to find out info, and he can put two and two together? I am terrifiyingly fascinated by Dinclusin. what if he was a product of very early dream experiments, and something went horribly wrong? like maybe this isn't his original body!!! his kind went so bad that he had to replace it somehow, hence the lack of facial control (his creepy ass smiling)? did Eames have something indirect maybe to do with his awfulness?