Oh wow, how awesome!

That's a really cool point about the linear journey, and you know what? It really limits the plot, but you gave me a good idea/feeling about the circular paths happening. It did come across right. Hmm, meditate on this, I will. There's something to that, being on rails. Like the story itself is on rails. I'll really have to think that out, but you've given me something to consider for this story. Thank you! ^_^