I keep thinking about this fic and IDK I think it would be interesting if the train "gets lost".
Holy crap, I love this idea, it's so Twilight Zone. I have no idea how the hell I would do that, but I'm going to think on it. It would almost have to be a dream, right? Or, hmm. Maybe not. What if it's not that the train gets lost, but what if it falls off the grid in terms of contact? Like, all cell phones, computers, and other "outside world" contact that is lost for a while. I wonder if that might work? That would give a lot more wiggle room in terms of scary, exciting things happening aboard.
I like the idea that Michelle really isn't who she seems. There's something more to our Pokemon lovin' friend.
A lot of people are saying this, and I think it's a great idea. If the others aren't who they seem, then why not her, too? YES, I love this.
But who? That's what I don't know. :)
Maybe a little more action happening? Like a chase, shootout, debate, argument, someone throws a table or chair over after a game is lost or accusations being thrown around.
YES, totally. You're right, this is why the train needs to get abandoned somehow, or left on its own. Maybe someone could even take it over. Like I said a few comments below ('cause I answered top to bottom this time, hehe :D ) having the train on the rails is exactly the same thing as having the story on the rails. There's only so much you can do. If a shootout or fight happened on a tour train, obviously the authorities would enter into it. Hmm.
UNLESS. Unless the shoot out / action happens outside of the train and in one of the towns and no one sees it except the main characters.
But then they would need a reason to stay aboard the train and not just GTFO.
Wow, so much to think about. Thank you for helping me think this all out! Any more suggestions, I am totally up for it. :D
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Date: 2011-03-10 04:03 am (UTC)DOOO EEEET... ;D
I keep thinking about this fic and IDK I think it would be interesting if the train "gets lost".
Holy crap, I love this idea, it's so Twilight Zone. I have no idea how the hell I would do that, but I'm going to think on it. It would almost have to be a dream, right? Or, hmm. Maybe not. What if it's not that the train gets lost, but what if it falls off the grid in terms of contact? Like, all cell phones, computers, and other "outside world" contact that is lost for a while. I wonder if that might work? That would give a lot more wiggle room in terms of scary, exciting things happening aboard.
I like the idea that Michelle really isn't who she seems. There's something more to our Pokemon lovin' friend.
A lot of people are saying this, and I think it's a great idea. If the others aren't who they seem, then why not her, too? YES, I love this.
But who? That's what I don't know. :)
Maybe a little more action happening? Like a chase, shootout, debate, argument, someone throws a table or chair over after a game is lost or accusations being thrown around.
YES, totally. You're right, this is why the train needs to get abandoned somehow, or left on its own. Maybe someone could even take it over. Like I said a few comments below ('cause I answered top to bottom this time, hehe :D ) having the train on the rails is exactly the same thing as having the story on the rails. There's only so much you can do. If a shootout or fight happened on a tour train, obviously the authorities would enter into it. Hmm.
UNLESS. Unless the shoot out / action happens outside of the train and in one of the towns and no one sees it except the main characters.
But then they would need a reason to stay aboard the train and not just GTFO.
Wow, so much to think about. Thank you for helping me think this all out! Any more suggestions, I am totally up for it. :D