I'm glad it's not a sickness either. I was kind of fretting as I wrote it, trying to figure out how I was going to get out of it. O_O
Well, in terms of plot, you're going to have them do the tour and then try to put Dinclusin under, right? Well, obviously, something's going to have to happen before they can do that. Possibly Eames, while distracting the mates with cards, gets grabbed by them. Arthur, lying in wait for Dinclusin...
You said the words "lying in wait" and you gave me an idea that I really like. I feel like something can go forward now. You have no idea how much that just helped. ^_^
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Date: 2011-03-10 04:05 am (UTC)I'm glad it's not a sickness either. I was kind of fretting as I wrote it, trying to figure out how I was going to get out of it. O_O
Well, in terms of plot, you're going to have them do the tour and then try to put Dinclusin under, right? Well, obviously, something's going to have to happen before they can do that. Possibly Eames, while distracting the mates with cards, gets grabbed by them. Arthur, lying in wait for Dinclusin...
You said the words "lying in wait" and you gave me an idea that I really like. I feel like something can go forward now. You have no idea how much that just helped. ^_^
THANK YOU!