Date: 2011-03-01 02:41 am (UTC)
\o/ I saw this right before I was going to do homework. Needless to say, I still need to do it. XD I'm so glad you updated! I hope your friends and family are okay, though. Life really sucks for all that to happen at once. :(

I am so in love with the atmosphere of this fic! It's kind of dark and intimate and mysterious... You worked in sponge-Eames! :D And the pocket watch- and chocolate-stealing was awesome!

I'd love to see something spooky happen, and also something sexy. XD Spookiness really is fantastic. I think there was a suggestion on the first chapter that Eames was going on the trip to run from something? I like that idea. Maybe Staring Guy is involved in that? But I'd also really like it if something much more sinister was going on... Supernatural or mindfuckery. Someone is poisoning Eames and he keeps having more disturbing dreams without any feeling of transition! XD I'll stop now.

One more note (long comment is long): I think in this sentence you meant 'flight', not 'fight': Eames reasoned that Arthur had had a longer fight than he'd had, earlier.
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