I think you can be faithful to the route of the train. You don't have to write every stop but wouldn't they be on their way to Kazan at this time?
something spooky: I want the rest of Dinclusin's gang to hover around Arthur while Dinclusin tries to kind of take away Eames for some reason. Like they're blocking for Dinclusin and Arthur gets super bad vibes and vague eerie non-verbal non-gestured just emotional warnings from them. And possibly starts seeing them out of the corners of his eyes all around the train. (I'm thinking Paranoia)
something sexy: I second the idea of them having sexy times in front of the window as scenery rushes past. Or I like the idea of after super fancy cocktails (where both are super dressed up) Arthur can't control his new possessiveness (protectiveness?) and it translates into him needing to jump Eames' bones. They go through the whole ruining coiffed hair, fussing with suspenders and cuff links, can't get undressed fast enough because of amazing suits, sex.
something exciting? On their stop touring the Kremlin Fortress they see an old enemy/somebody they both know and dislike and have to duck out and make it back to the train quickly and discreetly. IDK the spooky stuff is more exciting to me I think.
Dinclusin guy: I kind of get the "One of us" vibe off this group. Like they fit more with Arthur's style, but they're going after Eemes' because of his upbringing/breeding etc.
How about a scent you'd like written into the story? I'd love you to work in break pads/burning metal into this. Like when the breaks are working overly hard and it just gives this awful smell. I can see it coming up in a nightmare/spooky time where it's a warning of disaster but doesn't actually happen. Like one of them smells it and is fearful about the train somehow but it's not real.
Any more likes you'd like to hear that I could attempt to write in? Maybe since Arthur is from CA and doesn't like the cold a reverse of my suggestions before.
"This, Eames, is not what I had in mind when I thought of vacation. I think my fingers are turning black."
"Stop being so dramatic Darling, it's not even below zero."
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something spooky: I want the rest of Dinclusin's gang to hover around Arthur while Dinclusin tries to kind of take away Eames for some reason. Like they're blocking for Dinclusin and Arthur gets super bad vibes and vague eerie non-verbal non-gestured just emotional warnings from them. And possibly starts seeing them out of the corners of his eyes all around the train. (I'm thinking Paranoia)
something sexy: I second the idea of them having sexy times in front of the window as scenery rushes past. Or I like the idea of after super fancy cocktails (where both are super dressed up) Arthur can't control his new possessiveness (protectiveness?) and it translates into him needing to jump Eames' bones. They go through the whole ruining coiffed hair, fussing with suspenders and cuff links, can't get undressed fast enough because of amazing suits, sex.
something exciting? On their stop touring the Kremlin Fortress they see an old enemy/somebody they both know and dislike and have to duck out and make it back to the train quickly and discreetly. IDK the spooky stuff is more exciting to me I think.
Dinclusin guy: I kind of get the "One of us" vibe off this group. Like they fit more with Arthur's style, but they're going after Eemes' because of his upbringing/breeding etc.
How about a scent you'd like written into the story? I'd love you to work in break pads/burning metal into this. Like when the breaks are working overly hard and it just gives this awful smell. I can see it coming up in a nightmare/spooky time where it's a warning of disaster but doesn't actually happen. Like one of them smells it and is fearful about the train somehow but it's not real.
Any more likes you'd like to hear that I could attempt to write in? Maybe since Arthur is from CA and doesn't like the cold a reverse of my suggestions before.
"This, Eames, is not what I had in mind when I thought of vacation. I think my fingers are turning black."
"Stop being so dramatic Darling, it's not even below zero."
"Below zero? Temperatures go below zero?!"