Im also sorry to hear about your RL issues. I hope it all works out. Dont worry about taking longer. It's all well worth the wait and you just keep on doing what you're doing.
Thanks so much for including the pocket watch! I wasn't expecting Arthur to get one from Eames but that's even better than what I imagined.
And you did include some intimate moments! The touches to Eames' back and looking out for his well being and telling him if he needs anything that he's on the top bunk. Heh-totally love it.
It was creepy and intimate and believable as always.
I think this Dinclusin guy is definitely interested in Eames but not just for his looks. I think he's trying to sway Eames over to his company or "society" as Eames called it, probably something for some sort of job either for forging or not. Maybe a competing dream extraction team? I think Dinclusin knows about Eames' reputation and is trying to win him over/con him somehow.
I'd like to see either Arthur or Eames like lightly stroke/massage the back of the other's neck like when they're seated or maybe the back of their calf in a: "I'm letting you know I'm here" warm gesture, just like a little touch to let the other know that they're there or they care or whatevs.
Id like to see something from Eames' past come up (maybe from Dinclusin or that Dromalius chick). Like they know something about Eames that even Eames or Arthur doesnt know which can play back into the card game that they played on the train when they first met.
Anyway-long comment is long. Keep up the great work!
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Date: 2011-03-01 10:28 pm (UTC)Love the title too!
Im also sorry to hear about your RL issues. I hope it all works out. Dont worry about taking longer. It's all well worth the wait and you just keep on doing what you're doing.
Thanks so much for including the pocket watch! I wasn't expecting Arthur to get one from Eames but that's even better than what I imagined.
And you did include some intimate moments! The touches to Eames' back and looking out for his well being and telling him if he needs anything that he's on the top bunk. Heh-totally love it.
It was creepy and intimate and believable as always.
I think this Dinclusin guy is definitely interested in Eames but not just for his looks. I think he's trying to sway Eames over to his company or "society" as Eames called it, probably something for some sort of job either for forging or not. Maybe a competing dream extraction team? I think Dinclusin knows about Eames' reputation and is trying to win him over/con him somehow.
I'd like to see either Arthur or Eames like lightly stroke/massage the back of the other's neck like when they're seated or maybe the back of their calf in a: "I'm letting you know I'm here" warm gesture, just like a little touch to let the other know that they're there or they care or whatevs.
Id like to see something from Eames' past come up (maybe from Dinclusin or that Dromalius chick). Like they know something about Eames that even Eames or Arthur doesnt know which can play back into the card game that they played on the train when they first met.
Anyway-long comment is long. Keep up the great work!