http://osaki_nana_707.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] osaki-nana-707.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tabi_essentially 2011-02-15 06:34 pm (UTC)

GWAH THAT WAS AMAZING. I just adored every sentence. I really love how you start hinting about Arthur losing it by creeping that old-style slang into the dialogue. I see what you did there. I see it.

Also, I love Arthur being a little shit and scaring Eames. It's totally something that I would do if I were in an old house like that (if I wasn't the one being scared, that is).

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