This is amazing. Consistent with the movie but still original. I love when writers manage to write action well without being confusing and you've pulled it off perfectly. Particularly you have captured the same lowering, thundery feel that the movie has.
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Date: 2011-02-18 01:02 pm (UTC)This is amazing. Consistent with the movie but still original. I love when writers manage to write action well without being confusing and you've pulled it off perfectly. Particularly you have captured the same lowering, thundery feel that the movie has.
*thumbs up*