Ok, I give up. Every time I think that the next chapter can't possibly be better, becasue you just HAD to reach the end of excellence, that next chapter IS better. Seems tha writing while being tipsy works for you;P Anyway, to little more specific- I love the contrast between Arthur under, where he's able to as calm and composed, as we used to see him, and Arthur up above, where he finally reached the end of his mental endurance. His hysterical reaction seems to be so his. I mean, he's more than able to kill people, but the knowledge that he's subconscious is doing that and he can't control it in any way just has to be a scaring one. Still, he's not the kind of man, who'd be crying. So, yeah, laughing... A perfect solution to show all this emotions. The fact that it's a sight of Eames, which makes him stop laughing is kind of sweet and wonderful in the same time. And the devotion Cobb spotted in Arthur's eyes... I wonder if Eames noticed it as well. Probably yes, Eames is Eames after all, even with concussion. The idea of Glitch manifesting itself in every people other way is great, the same with Arthur reaction after he saw Cobb's projection. I love this lighter moments in this, otherwise, rather dark and sometimes really creepy story (which doesn't make me don't like it, though!). And I'm still fascinated with the idea that Glitch becames a part of subconsious the person, who is infected with it. And the bad guy! Hollis is just enough rotten, there's no way to like him. But even if he's pathetic (at least in Arthur's eyes and eyes of the rest our beloved characters), he's still dangerous. And you did it again! You ended in that exact moment that makes it hard to wait for the next chapter! Even though, I guess there aren't any proper moments to finish. Looking forward for next chapter! P.S. I'm thinking about using that method of writing, maybe if I get myself drunk, I'll be able to write something really great;D
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Anyway, to little more specific- I love the contrast between Arthur under, where he's able to as calm and composed, as we used to see him, and Arthur up above, where he finally reached the end of his mental endurance. His hysterical reaction seems to be so his. I mean, he's more than able to kill people, but the knowledge that he's subconscious is doing that and he can't control it in any way just has to be a scaring one. Still, he's not the kind of man, who'd be crying. So, yeah, laughing... A perfect solution to show all this emotions.
The fact that it's a sight of Eames, which makes him stop laughing is kind of sweet and wonderful in the same time. And the devotion Cobb spotted in Arthur's eyes... I wonder if Eames noticed it as well. Probably yes, Eames is Eames after all, even with concussion.
The idea of Glitch manifesting itself in every people other way is great, the same with Arthur reaction after he saw Cobb's projection. I love this lighter moments in this, otherwise, rather dark and sometimes really creepy story (which doesn't make me don't like it, though!).
And I'm still fascinated with the idea that Glitch becames a part of subconsious the person, who is infected with it.
And the bad guy! Hollis is just enough rotten, there's no way to like him. But even if he's pathetic (at least in Arthur's eyes and eyes of the rest our beloved characters), he's still dangerous.
And you did it again! You ended in that exact moment that makes it hard to wait for the next chapter! Even though, I guess there aren't any proper moments to finish.
Looking forward for next chapter!
P.S. I'm thinking about using that method of writing, maybe if I get myself drunk, I'll be able to write something really great;D