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Some quick notes! Real life handed me a plate of steaming hot doodoo this week, with best friend in the hospital, boyfriend's dad in the hospital, and family member in the hospital very ill. I'm very sorry for the wait. However, fandom and writing are two things that relax me and get my mind off things. So even if it takes me longer than usual, I will be here, writing and updating.

That said, updates on this one will probably take longer than they have in the past. This is mainly because it takes me a while to tally up some of the suggestions and write them in. :D I do most of my writing in my head while I'm bored at work, then come home and type them up. With suggestions to work in, it could take a while. ^_^

(Oh! And I know, I've got to repost Something Like, I will try to remember to do that. So sorry!)

So here's how we ended up:
The train:
Trans Siberian – 7 votes
Italy – 5 votes

Trans Siberian it is!

A few people were for a spooky face outside the window, even a bloody face. Creepy! One vote for Arthur to have a nightmare, two votes for Eames.

Here are some suggestions that I received. If they haven't gone into this chapter, I'm still going to try to get them into a later chapter. :D Sometimes I might have to stretch it out a bit. I'm going to try to get a little something for everyone. These suggestions are really cool!

[livejournal.com profile] twilightthief - Maybe one of the train operators/workers like opening their pocket watch?

[livejournal.com profile] gelbwax AND [livejournal.com profile] mydeerfriend - I would like to see AND hear a golden eagle, because those things are badass and scary. (Question: Sorry if this sounds dumb, but are we talking about a golden eagle bird of prey, golden eagle touring train, which they are actually on, or a golden eagle shotgun? ^_^ )

[livejournal.com profile] astheytick - Arthur says to Eames "Just wait. Wait for me."

[livejournal.com profile] mydeerfriend AND Ectotherm!Arthur being warmed up by Eames

[livejournal.com profile] orion_nightbane - people lurking outside their door would be interesting?

[livejournal.com profile] towel_master I'd also maybe like to see sponge-Eames getting bored/impatient on the train and Arthur cheering him back up.

[livejournal.com profile] twisted_ream there's this huge spider on eames' back and he can't get it off and arthur just laughs

[livejournal.com profile] skyvehicle Arthur leaning over the top bunk to talk to Eames below.

[livejournal.com profile] french_noodles blood spattered flowers

[livejournal.com profile] efcia a broken mirror, possibly a small one. I can see the shattered glass, maybe even a small amount of blood on them?

[livejournal.com profile] sweetsigh What I want Arthur to ask Eames: "Get me some of those kitties damn truffles before I shoot your foot"
Because I love chocolate.


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** ** ** **
Chapter Two: Sixes, Sevens and Nines


Arthur liked it, the steady thrum of rails under the floor, the background noise of the engine, the occasional whistle. The room had a CD/DVD player and there was a place to rent movies, and maybe later they would rent some Russian film (or Arthur would download one and then burn it,) but for the most part, he was happy with the drone of the train. He liked white noise. It soothed him.

It took him about thirty seconds to style his hair back away from his face. He'd done it like that for years, because it was just easier to work, to see on all sides. He could admit to himself that for the first few years, he'd done so that because it was how Cobb wore his hair when he was working.

Behind him, Arthur could see Eames in the mirror, fastening his own cufflinks. He looked good in dark blue. ("PROPER DRESS" the sign on the door to one of the many restaurant cars had read.) Eames was clearly dressing to blend in tonight, which meant that he had something in mind that went beyond having dinner in the awesome looking dining car, and then going for a few card games. He smiled. Not even their first night, and Eames had already started. Arthur watched his hands as he pulled the cuffs of his shirt. They were large hands, but his fingers were quick, even quicker than Arthur's. He even typed fast.

"I looked at the menu," Eames said. "Needless to say, I'm very excited. The desserts looked amazing. There was one... What?" He looked up into the mirror and saw Arthur staring. He peered closer at his own reflection, trying to see if something was amiss.

"Nothing," Arthur said. "I just think you look good."

Eames smiled at him. "Thank you."

"I looked up the menu online last week," Arthur said. "Looks pretty good. What time is it?"

"Five thirty. Our reservation is six."

"Let's have a look around first," Arthur said.

He took a last glance in the mirror then let Eames edge past him (okay, this room was cool, but it was fucking tiny and were they really both going to fit in here for the duration of the trip?) Arthur followed, and Eames made to slide the door closed behind him, but Arthur stopped it with his hand.

Before the door slid shut, he reached back into the inside of the cabin and pressed a button on the tiny, silent alarm he'd rigged across the door. It was a beam of light across the floor. If broken by someone going into their room, then his cell phone would ring. When he picked it up, it would link to a camera he had installed in the ceiling. He was prepared for attendants to come in and clean, make up the beds and that sort of thing. But you couldn't be too careful.

Eames looked over his shoulder. "The cell phone trick?"

"It's one of my best."

"A work of art," Eames said.

Arthur closed and locked the door, and they were on their way.

The noise outside of the compartment was less pleasant, but he could get used to anything. Crowds didn't present him with any problems unless he was already in a really bad mood. It was the first day of the trip and everyone was loud, boisterous, and still annoyed almost to the point of frenzy. They chattered, bickered, shoved and huffed as they tried to find their places, where they belonged in some status circle that Arthur had never understood. Who had the better things, and who showed them off to the greatest advantage – that seemed to be part of the contest. Arthur didn't get it, but Eames did. Well, Eames got most of what people were going on about, most of the time anyway. But he also understood the money/status thing. He didn't take part in it, but his family might have, back when Eames was young, before he'd left that behind.

Now, though, the preening that these men and women were doing only presented them with opportunities. They flashed their goods like whores. And neither Eames nor Arthur liked paying for things when they didn't have to.

The cars of the train were plush, almost to the point of ridiculousness. The walkways were tight though. When people shoved at them, usually Eames would do a bit of "oh, beg pardon," as he slipped his hands into pockets, purses, jackets, even holsters.

But tonight, he just looked annoyed when people got in his space. Arthur understood this, too. This was Eames wanting to be in a bubble. He could be very fussy like that, almost withdrawn. It had taken Arthur years to be allowed inside that space when Eames was like this. Eames would probably have a headache later, one which he would bitch about and generously share with Arthur if he didn't defuse this now.

He placed his hand on the arch of Eames's low back – not solicitous, just present. When Eames looked over his shoulder at him, Arthur just smiled. I get it. Chill.

Eames took a deep breath and released it, letting some of the tension drain from his back.

They turned to move forward again, but their path was blocked by a tall, blond man. He was of some indeterminable age between the 30s and 40s, with eyes so light blue that Arthur had to stare for a moment. They were large, too, and luminous. His clothes were similar to Arthur's, he was annoyed to note: tailored and classic. He doesn't have a hat, though, Arthur thought, ridiculously. His dislike was immediate.

It may have been because of the way this guy was eyeing Eames so blatantly, but probably not. People gawked at Eames all the time and it never bothered him. But this guy had actually blocked their path and was now just staring, those big, shining eyes surprised and clearly interested.

"Oh, my," the man said.

Really? Arthur thought. Because, how rude was that? Just going up to someone and deciding it was all right to let them know you wanted into their pants, without even finding out first if... Of course, that was more or less what Arthur had done, years ago when he'd first met Eames, too.

And he was being stupid, because it wasn't as if there was any possibility that Eames would be - he wasn't going to use the word "unfaithful" because there had never been any vow of "faith" between them. On the battlefield, yes, but not sexually, and there never would be.

Still, Arthur found himself pushing in front of Eames to take the lead, effectively blocking this guy's view by putting himself between them.

"Excuse me," Arthur said.

"Of course," the man answered. His voice was low, almost a whisper. Then he eyed Arthur, a clearly appraising look. He very obviously decided, Not bad, then dismissed him with a glance past him, again at Eames.

Arthur felt like if he had hackles, they would be up. It wasn't jealousy or possessiveness or anything like that, either. This creep, his blue eyes gave Arthur the heebie-jeebies, there was no other explanation. And if he kept gawking like that, he was going to get a punch on the beezer. Arthur didn't like people staring at either of them for too long. It set his teeth on edge and made him feel like they were being made.

"Let's go, darling," Eames said, now putting his hand on Arthur's back. "Excuse us, please," he said to the staring guy.

Finally, the man stepped aside. With a sweeping gesture, he allowed them to pass.

Allowed them.

Arthur fought the urge to go back there and and show Staring Guy just how he felt about being allowed to pass. No one gave Arthur permission to do anything, not when he wasn't working for them, anyway.

When they got to the restaurant car, they were taken in about fifteen minutes early and ushered to two red, plush seats opposite each other – a booth with a small table between them. They huddled into the seats.

"What the fuck was that guy's problem?" Arthur asked. He grabbed at a piece of bread and buttered it.

Eames tried valiantly not to grin, but failed. Arthur was going to punch him later, maybe. Then he reached into his pocket and drew out a bill. "All he had was a ten. American money, no less. Hardly worth allowing him to eye-fuck me."

"Seriously?" Arthur asked. Because Eames hadn't allowed that – the guy had just done it.

"He was just looking," Eames said.

"Well it felt like a grift."

"You're paranoid."

"It's my job to be paranoid."

"Is it so far fetched that someone would want to look me over? Of course I'm not the handsome conman I was back in the day, but I'm only young, still, and I like to think that..."

"You're ridiculously attractive, that's not even up for debate. And yeah, he was checking you out. That happens all the time. But I got a feeling off him that I didn't like."

"Why are you so mean to your food?" Eames asked. "I've never seen anyone butter bread with such aggression. Control your testosterone."

Arthur narrowed his eyes and dipped the buttered bread into olive oil before taking a bite. It was fresh and warm. "This is delicious," he said. It came out sounding like an insult, which he didn't mean.

"Arthur," Eames said. He was still smiling. "Are you j--"

"Don't." He pointed his bread at Eames. "Don't even fucking say the word. You know I'm not. I just know a creep when I see one."

"I'll steal something else from him and give it to you," Eames said.

"Don't bother. I feel like it would be more trouble that it's worth."

Eames let the subject drop, which Arthur took to mean that he would go out of his way to prove him wrong anyway. When it came time to order, Eames asked for Rassolnik, in perfect Russian. Eames knew a little bit of most languages, often enough to get by. Arthur knew more useful words and phrases than Eames did, but he never got the accents right. He ordered the potato and mushroom dish in Russian anyway.

"I do speak English, you know," the waiter said, with a British accent.

"We're practicing," Eames told him.

When the food arrived, Arthur raised his glass and said, "Na zdarOv’y" – "enjoy" – and Eames didn't correct his accent. The food was so good that Arthur almost – almost, but not quite – forgot about Staring Guy. He ate everything, quickly, the way he usually did, while Eames ate slowly, talking endlessly about Russia, trains, the last time he was here and what happened, history, Catherine the Great, cuisine, and whatever else occurred to him. Arthur listened, asking questions now and then, and feeling satisfied and strangely enlightened.

"Good god," Eames said later, as they were finishing dessert, "this was such a good idea. I might never go back to eating regular food again. Perhaps I'll live here."

"It's too cold," Arthur said.

"You've survived worse."

"Not by choice. But I agree, this was a great idea."

Post-dinner, the crowd seemed to have settled down. Sometimes, Arthur mused, all it took was the basic assurance of food and comfort to turn people human again. He felt relaxed and decided to let his guard drop, just a little. Nothing terrible was going to happen on this train. To constantly live in that kind of suspense was not only wasteful, it was unhealthy. It had taken him years to learn how to turn that off, but these days, he could if he concentrated enough. "Shell-shock," they used to call it in the early days. Well, he had finally gotten over his, and he knew how to not be like that.

This trip was going to be interesting. Not dangerous, just interesting. He was sure of it.

** ** ** **

There was a lounge, of course, and Eames seemed to find it by sense rather than by looking at directions. It was as if he could hear the shuffling of cards and the exchange of tokens.

In the lounge, again there were red seats, and half-circle tables as well as one-on-one, private tables. Arthur didn't have a deck of cards, but he would bet that Eames did. The first time they'd ridden the train together, Eames had entertained (and occasionally annoyed) him with card games. He thought of it fondly. Tonight, they'd sit on the train and play cards again, like they had the first time. Maybe it would be fun if they played for truthful answers, the way they had back then. But on the other hand, by now he probably didn't have any secrets, and neither did Eames. He wondered if he could think of anything he'd really like to know, that he didn't already.

He never got the chance to, though, and he wasn't entirely surprised to see the blue-eyed man staring once again at Eames from a table on the other side of the car. Staring Guy was surrounded by others, all playing a card game. He beckoned Eames over to him. Arthur felt all of his alerts instantly re-engage.

Eames smiled and declined with a polite wave of his hand.

But then Staring Guy rose from his table and and seemed to glide over to them. Eames stood in front of Arthur, as if to prevent him from doing something ridiculous, which was insulting.

"Hello there," the man said. His accent was British, similar to Eames's real one. He looked only at Eames when he spoke. "Terribly sorry for having been in your path earlier. Very clumsy, I'm afraid."

Arthur didn't buy this for a minute. The man offered his hand to Eames. "Jack St. John Dinclusin," he said. He pronounced 'St. John' as 'Sinjin.' "'Jack' will do."

"No problem, mate," Eames said, shaking his hand. "Thomas Eames. Cambridge I think?"

"Very good," Jack said. "Pleased to meet you, Mr. Eames."

Eames didn't tell him to call him Tommy, which made Arthur smile. "This is Arthur," he said, standing aside.

"Hey," Arthur said, and he shook Jack's hand, which was was colder than his own.

"A pleasure, Arthur," he said. "California, I believe?"

Arthur drew his hand back. "You got that from one word?"

"I'm a bit of a linguist," Jack said. "And an America-phile, to be honest. I love the west coast."

"I see," Arthur said.

"Well, listen," Jack said, now focusing again on Eames, "we've got one spot left at our table that needs filling. Either of you interested?"

"We're a bit tired," Eames said.

"Please, we insist on one game. We'll buy you a round."

Arthur knew that Eames was going to say yes. He was still going to try to glaum something off this guy, and maybe even his gang at the table. He'd said he would, and against Arthur's warnings to let it go, he probably felt like he had to. Arthur looked them over, the group at the half-circle table. Three men and one woman, all in their thirties or maybe forties. They were all dressed sharp, like he was. The woman was blond, with neatly gelled, short hair and cool, blue eyes. They were all attractive. Eames actually looked as if he belonged with them.

"Go on," Arthur said, before Eames had the chance to make it awkward by asking him if it was all right. "I'm gonna get a drink, okay?" He wasn't, or at least not one with alcohol. He tried to put a warning into his eyes: Don't fuck with these people, I sense trouble. But Eames already knew what he thought.

"It'll be a quick game, Arthur," Eames said. And with that, he headed over to the table. They were boisterous when they all introduced themselves, as if it were some sort of reunion. Well, they were all from around the same area, and had that much in common, so it wasn't surprising.

He took a seat not at the bar, but next to it, where he could take covert glances over at the table.

His view was soon blocked, however, by a bored looking teenage girl, who seated herself in his line of vision and started listlessly shuffling a deck of cards. She looked to be about fifteen, with lank, brown hair and an obviously indecorous Pokemon keychain attached to her belt. She looked as out of place as Arthur suddenly felt. And Arthur never felt out of place, not anywhere, and not in any situation. He scanned the room for her parents and found them quickly because the father kept glancing over at her. He looked both watchful and disapproving, the way most fathers did at their recalcitrant teenage daughters. They were at a different table. The mother seemed to be discussing her, judging by her whispers to her cohorts, and glances at the girl.

"I like your hat," the girl said to him.

"Huh?" Arthur was surprised to see her now sitting across from him at the small table.

"Your hat. It's cool. You look like James Cagney."

"No I don't. He was blond. But thanks."

She shrugged.

"You look bored," Arthur said.

She rolled her eyes. "As you can probably guess, this trip was not my idea."

"It's really interesting, if you give it a chance," he said.

"Whatever," she answered. "I saw your boyfriend ditch you. Ouch."

Arthur laughed – there was no other reaction he could think of. "He's not my boyfriend, Christ. I'm thirty-three. We work together."

"Uh huh, that's why you were all handsy with him earlier."

Arthur dismissed this without a response. "They're just being British together, over there."

"I know. My Mom's British. She's a bitch, though."

"You shouldn't say that about your Mom," Arthur said. He re-thought. When had he started sounding like this? "Scratch that. My Mom was a bitch, too. Well, when she cared enough to make the effort."

"Wah-hah," the girl said, mocking. "Anyways, I'm Michelle."

"Arthur."

"Yeah, I got that."

"Nothing gets past you," Arthur said.

"Nope."

He watched her shuffle the cards. Took a glance over at Eames, who was doing his "lose on purpose while I siphon your money" thing. Something tightened in Arthur's chest. It wasn't going to work.

"You play cards?" Arthur asked Michelle.

"No. I just like to shuffle them."

"You must at least know how to play War."

"Mankind is born knowing how to play war." She looked him in the eye, going for a hard, weary look that she failed at miserably, and he hoped she would continue to fail at. She reminded him of Ariadne.

"That's very profound," he said, lightly mocking her in return. "Come on, let's play. I need to keep looking over your shoulder at that table."

"You think he's gonna cheat on you with that hot guy?" she said.

"No," Arthur said. "That's the least of my worries."

"Something else weird is going on, then," she said. "This whole thing gives me a weird vibe."

He had to agree with her on that.

** ** ** **

Eames glanced at Arthur for what felt like the thousandth time that night. His little, adolescent card-playing partner had long since run off to play with her own portable video game system. Eames had watched Arthur play War with her a few times, and then attempt to teach her Bridge and Rummy. He also saw that Arthur was watching his table carefully. Not watching him, but watching the others, and making mental notes for future reference. His alerts were on high. Eames could almost see lights blinking in the computer of his head. It was not the first time that he had likened Arthur to a robot of some sort.

But Eames had this; he had these people figured out. Jack Dinclusin, Kenzie and Giles Fenderlyn, and the woman, Ann Dromalius. They were Society, as his parents had been, and as his siblings still were, for all he knew. He was familiar with this sort of person.

Jack sat next to him the entire time. Eames could feel his eyes on him once in a while. It didn't make him uncomfortable, being watched, because he could shift to being what he wanted the other person to see, with ease. Right now, he was the affable English guy, everyone's mate, harmless, charming, funny, good at the game but not too good.

It wasn't a quick game, as Eames had said it would be. But then, none of these games ever were. It was midnight by the time they wrapped up, and noisy as hell when they were saying good night. Over the din, and over the heads of the others, he saw Arthur stand up, frowning as he did when something had surprised him. Then he saw Arthur grab for his phone as if he were going for a gun. Eames's hand moved reflexively to where he was not carrying a gun, either, before he could stop it. He tucked it back down at his side.

Arthur didn't answer the phone, he just looked at it.

"Well then," Jack said, "quite a good game, Mr. Eames."

"Yes, yes," Eames said. "Good game." Jack was searching his face, trying to make eye contact. "I'm sorry mate, looks like I've got to run. Arthur's just heard from his Mum; his Dad's been ill."

"Oh, so sorry," Jack said. He stared at Eames as he said it, forcing him to meet his eyes. Jack's look stated clearly that he knew this was a lie. He looked blank, almost. Lids too wide around the irises, and for a moment, predatory.

Eames shuttered himself away behind a wall. "Good night," he said, pointedly, and moved past him.

Arthur was still staring at the screen on his phone when Eames got to him. If anyone had been trying to take something from them, Arthur would not still be standing here.

"What is it?" Eames asked.

Arthur tilted the phone towards him.

One of the staff was closing the door behind him as he left the room. The only thing that was out of place was the vase of flowers now sat on the bedside table. He frowned at Arthur, who said nothing as he tucked his phone away.

They quickly made their way back to their compartment. Once inside, they stood side by side, staring at the bouquet of flowers on the table. Pink and white carnations, mostly.

"Maybe all rooms get flowers," Eames said.

Arthur glared at him, then went back to looking at the flowers.

"Well," Eames said, "it's not like it's a bad thing. It's not a bomb or anything."

At that, Arthur moved closer to the vase, cautious and slow. Eames couldn't honestly believe that there would be a bomb hidden inside the flowers, but he had obviously given Arthur the idea. The vase was clear, where would anyone hide a bomb in a glass vase. It would take expertise and technology that neither of them possessed, and if someone wanted them dead, there were easier ways.

Arthur didn't move the vase. Instead, he took something out of his bag of toys; a compact, hand-held trace detector. He scanned it over the tops of the flowers. Nothing showed up. He tucked it away again.

"If someone sent you flowers," Arthur said, "then they know what room we're in."

"How do you know they're for me?" Eames said. "Maybe they're for you, darling. Or both of us."

Arthur rolled his eyes. "Well. At any rate, it looks like the most dangerous thing on here is pollen. Probably pretty safe. Weird, though. Did that Jack guy send it, maybe?"

"I don't see how he could have. He was sat at the table the whole night, he never had the chance."

Arthur nodded. He looked strangely tired, more so than usual. Eames reasoned that Arthur had had a longer fight than he'd had, earlier. Of course he was exhausted.

"Why don't you see if the shower is free, so you can get to bed?" Eames said. "We share it with the next room, but there's only one person staying in there. I'll go later, yeah?"

Arthur nodded, and started going through his suitcase, looking for pajamas. There was a weary set to his shoulders.

"Oh, I nearly forgot," Eames said. He pulled Arthur backwards by his beltloops and set him down on the lower bed, next to him. "I nicked this for you." He dug into his pocket.

"Not off those people, I hope," Arthur said.

"No. You asked me not to, Arthur. I took your advice, as I often do." Arthur smiled. "No, I got this off one of the conductors."

"Jesus, Eames." Arthur sounded exasperated, but he was still smiling.

Eames pulled out a gold pocketwatch with a train etched into the front. "It's not a sentimental thing, they all carry them. And it probably doesn't have much value and perhaps you can buy them at a gift shop. But I thought it suited you."

Arthur took it and clicked it open. The numbers were big and fancy, and he ran his finger across the glass face of it. "It's really cool," he said. "Thanks, Eames."

"My pleasure." Which he meant, because he always got a kick out of stealing, and he always got a kick out of giving Arthur interesting things, too. "I get head for this, right?" he said, before it got too serious.

Arthur laughed softly. "Sure. Later, though, okay?"

"Later," Eames agreed.

** ** ** **

Later, though, Eames simply returned from the semi-communal shower to find Arthur already in the top bunk, lit only by a hand held game system on pause. He was fast asleep. The music kept playing, strangely lush over the sound of the train.

Eames shook him awake. "Your batteries are going to die," he said.

Arthur woke instantly, as he always did. "Hmm? Oh. Batteries are a thing of the past. But thanks." He shut down the system and tucked it into a small carrying case.

Eames was so fond of him sometimes.

"Oh, wait. Before you fall asleep." Arthur swung his legs over the edge of his bunk and jumped down.

"I was kidding about giving me head. If you're too tired, I mean."

"I got you something, too, while you were in the shower. And by 'got' I mean 'stole.' Umm." He took something from one of the compartments. "It's not as daring as yours, but you're a better thief than I am. It's just little. I got it off the cart." He held out a box of gourmet chocolate truffles. An easier grab, by far, but probably worth more than the pocketwatch that Eames had stolen.

"My goodness," Eames said.

"You shouldn't have one before bed, though." He yawned. "It'll keep you awake."

"Perhaps," Eames said, but opened one anyway and bit into it. It was delicious, the darkest of dark chocolate that he loved. "Jesus. This might be better than head."

"I'm this close to agreeing with you," Arthur said. He watched Eames eat it as if he couldn't look away. When he licked his own lips, it seemed an unconscious gesture. Then he pulled himself into the top bunk without using the ladder. He fussed around with the blankets for a few seconds before leaning back over and peering to the bottom bed. "Good night, Mr. Eames," he said.

Eames reached up and awkwardly cupped his chin. There's no one like you, he wanted to say, and there isn't even a close second, but he refrained. There was no need for that sort of thing. Instead he just said, "Good night," and released him.

Arthur smiled, or rather smirked, slightly wry. Then he went back into the top bed and settled in.

A few minutes later, Eames turned off the light.

** ** ** **

The scent of carnations followed him into the dark. His mum had loved those. He hadn't smelled them before, though; when he'd shut the light earlier, the flowers had just smelled chilled and slightly planty-y.

Eames turned on the small light above his bed. Arthur didn't stir. He was glad; he didn't want to wake him.

The carnations that had been white and pink were now speckled red. They hadn't been before; Eames noticed things like this. He had to, because he observed for a living and often to save his life. He would have seen red-spotted flowers instead of white or pink ones.

He reached over to the bedside table and touched one of them. The red flecks were warm, and smeared down the petals when he prodded them. He drew his finger back and decided to wake Arthur.

Before he could, he saw the man staring into the window beside his bed. It was dark, the background was moving, he couldn't make out any features other than the mouth. The mouth was white with teeth, and stretched wide. Too wide to be normal or even possible.

Eames flung himself out of the bed and scrambled for his gun, on the small dining table under the DVD player. He grabbed it and pressed his back against the door, staring at the window.

The face was gone.

"What is it?" Arthur asked, awake and alert. He swung down from the bed and had his Glock in hand before he even got to where Eames was crouching.

"The window," Eames said. He was panting hard, he felt hot, sweaty and trembly. Because, how the fuck did something get outside the window? The train was moving; he could feel it. He could still hear it.

He reached for the poker chip in the pocket sewn into his pajama bottoms. He felt the weight of it, the familiar wear of the letters.

Reality.

Still, he looked to Arthur.

"We're awake," Arthur said, and reached for his own totem. He drew it out of his own pocket and tossed it three times onto the floor. It landed on three each time.

Eames didn't know if he felt relieved or not. There had been no moment of waking, no shift from the dream to reality that he was aware of.

"You dreamed of someone at the window?" Arthur asked.

Eames nodded. He rubbed his face and scrubbed at his eyes with the back of his hand. "Yeah. First nightmare I've had in years, really. Well, first one that actually worked like one of those nightmares where you think you're awake. What I mean is..."

"Not lucid," Arthur finished for him. "A natural dream, no outside awareness."

"Just so," Eames said.

"What did they look like? At the window, I mean."

"Didn't see his face, really. Just a person standing there. And blood, too. Not at the window, but on the flowers." He inhaled to see if he could still smell them like he had in the dream. He couldn't.

He felt utterly stupid. Professional dreamer, having nightmares like a little kid, faces outside the window of a train for fuck's sake. He laughed a little. Arthur smiled and stood up, offering Eames his hand. Eames allowed himself to be pulled up, even though it wasn't necessary.

"Told you to hold off on the chocolate," Arthur said.

Eames glanced at the clock. He'd only been asleep for thirty minutes. Arthur vaulted himself into his top bed again, and Eames sank back into his. He felt exhausted now, but unsettled.

Arthur peered down over the edge of his bed again. "You all right, though?"

"In perfect order," Eames assured him. "Just unused to my own level of amateurishness and slightly disappointed in myself."

"You look unsettled," Arthur observed.

"I'm fine. Really. Get some sleep."

Arthur nodded, still slightly dubious. "Well," he said, "you know. I'm right up here if you need anything."

Eames acknowledged him with a nod and made a decent show of settling back into his bed and appearing comfortable. Arthur watched him for a few more seconds before lying down again.

Arthur actually slept the entire night. Eames did not.

** ** ** **


Okay, there we are!

Now tell me, what next? They've got to make a stop on the train, right? This was the tour you guys booked for them! ^_^

So I'd like: something spooky, something sexy, something exciting?

Also, tell me something about this Dinclusin guy. What do you think he should do / who do you think he is? What do you think he wants? I have a vague idea I'm working with, but I'd like more input on him. Also on Ann Dromalius. Or really any of them.

How about a scent you'd like written into the story?

Any more likes you'd like to hear that I could attempt to write in?

I hope you guys like this; thanks for all the awesome suggestions, and also for being patient with me. :D

Chapter 3 - Dust In Your Garden

Date: 2011-03-01 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelain.livejournal.com
spooky and sexy! haha omg I love this D: and I feel something horrible is going to happen but I need it!

Have you ever seen baccano (http://www.youtube.com/show/baccano?s=1)? Maybe Dinclusin enjoys inflicting some Rail Tracer torture.

Date: 2011-03-03 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
you might be right about something horrible! ^_^

I have never seen that anime though. Looks kind of interesting! :D

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Date: 2011-03-01 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gelbwax.livejournal.com
THIS. IS. SO. AWESOME.

Spooky: Someone from Eames's past! Someone bad!
Sexy: Arthur, naked except for fedora, mounting Eames. Duh.
Exciting: An appearance by a goddamn golden eagle!
Dinclusin is Daniel Craig. Oh my god, please. Ann Dromalius is Tilda Swinton? Maybe.
Scent: Old Spice.


This is what I mean for golden eagles:
motherfucking golden eagle

THIS THING IS SO FUCKING BADASS. IT IS LIKE THE ARTHUR OF THE ANIMAL KINGDOM. LOOK AT THAT FUCKING EYEBROW.

Date: 2011-03-03 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Pretty sure you're getting two of these prompts in the next chapter. ^_^;; But I won't say which. That, by the way, is an awesome picture!

Date: 2011-03-01 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renton6echo.livejournal.com
I am definitely intrigued and creeped out by this Dinclusin guy, I really hope Arthur deals with the man properly! I think Michelle has the potential for being an interesting character in the story, someone so observant would certainly seem to help Arthur by unintentionally giving him some intel on Dinclusin and the high society folk he surrounds himself with.

As for a scent? I would really like Arthur to catch a scent of Eames's aftershave not on Eames but perhaps on someone else, or some location on the train.

Love the story so far!
Best Wishes!

Date: 2011-03-03 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Great idea about Michelle! I do want to include her more. :)

Okay, going to copy/paste your suggestions. Thanks so much! ^_^

Date: 2011-03-01 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] towel-master.livejournal.com
\o/ I saw this right before I was going to do homework. Needless to say, I still need to do it. XD I'm so glad you updated! I hope your friends and family are okay, though. Life really sucks for all that to happen at once. :(

I am so in love with the atmosphere of this fic! It's kind of dark and intimate and mysterious... You worked in sponge-Eames! :D And the pocket watch- and chocolate-stealing was awesome!

I'd love to see something spooky happen, and also something sexy. XD Spookiness really is fantastic. I think there was a suggestion on the first chapter that Eames was going on the trip to run from something? I like that idea. Maybe Staring Guy is involved in that? But I'd also really like it if something much more sinister was going on... Supernatural or mindfuckery. Someone is poisoning Eames and he keeps having more disturbing dreams without any feeling of transition! XD I'll stop now.

One more note (long comment is long): I think in this sentence you meant 'flight', not 'fight': Eames reasoned that Arthur had had a longer fight than he'd had, earlier.

Date: 2011-03-03 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. I hope they'll be okay, too. Things do tend to happen all at once, it feels like fiction, right? But it's not. :(

ANYway. I really did love the suggestions you made!

Supernatural or mindfuckery. Someone is poisoning Eames and he keeps having more disturbing dreams without any feeling of transition! XD I'll stop now.

I like this, too. Hmm, very interesting!

Thank you for finding that typo, I'll get to fixing that. I appreciate it! :D

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Date: 2011-03-01 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fae-boleyn.livejournal.com
I love the not-quite-saying-emotional-things the boys have going on here. They're usually too busy running around and trying not to die in your fics for that (which is not a bad thing, you know I love your stuff) so it's an amusing change. They don't need to do any of it, which is probably good because, um, not good at it. :D :D

Scent... Um, cinnamon, incense, or woodsmoke. And tour stop: Yekaterinburg, the site of the Romanovs' death. *is a history buff*

Date: 2011-03-03 12:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Hey! :D I agree about them not being about the huge love declarations. I see them as more practical. it's enough to be saving each other's asses and having each other's backs in the worst situation; I think that can say more than words or romantic gestures can. And yeah. Probably not good at it. :D

Okay, copy/pasting your suggestions, too! :D Thanks a ton!

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Date: 2011-03-01 02:50 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] epithalamium
I suck at suggestions, so I'm just going to say that I'm loving what you're doing with this so far. :D

The outwardly casual relationship Eames and Arthur have, Arthur's jealousy earlier on, "I've never seen anyone butter bread with such aggression. Control your testosterone.", and the face at the window! Looking forward to what happens next. :D

Date: 2011-03-03 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
I'm glad that part gave you a giggle, I personally really liked that line myself. ^_^

I'm glad you like it, and remember, I'm open to suggestions later down the road, too. :D Thanks so much!

Date: 2011-03-01 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avaserenity.livejournal.com
"Why are you so mean to your food?" Eames asked. "I've never seen anyone butter bread with such aggression. Control your testosterone."

The mental picture this give me is just so pleasing and hilarious at the same time.

Date: 2011-03-03 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked that line. :D I kinda did too, TBH. Hehe. Thanks! ^_^

Date: 2011-03-01 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quixyjie.livejournal.com
Fabulous. I love it.

Dinclusin - A linguaphile...maybe he and his crew are actually transporting something very important. Like..museum artifacts. Or something.

Something spooky: Okay I can't really deal with spooky so I am all out of suggestions for this one.

Something sexy: Eames smokes a cigar to get chummy with Jack & Co and Arthur loses his shit. Like, seriously, Eames, those lips.

Something exciting: Arthur finds something that he thinks he had lost! Tangible, abstract, whatever! :D

Wooohoooooooooo ALL ABOARD.

Date: 2011-03-01 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twilightthief.livejournal.com
I totally want to see Eames smoke a cigar too!

I was imagining that as well!

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Date: 2011-03-01 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wirrrn.livejournal.com

Awesome! Love the angry buttering, and Michelle :)

1] Spooky: Arthur sees the same face that Eames just saw, but sees it next to him in his bed

2] Sexy- the boys fuck in front of the window whilst the scenery whizzes by

3] Exciting- one or both have to get up on top of the train at some point.

Dinclusin and his Coven: From their names, I assume they're very, very old, and interested in Eames' blood type :) Bonus points if Eames recognizes them from an old story he once heard :)

Scent- Burning Hair.

Something else: A phrase from either of the guys- "Only you would get us first-class tickets to PHANTASM on rails"

Date: 2011-03-03 01:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
YES, so glad you liked the angry buttering, hehe. :D I couldn't help but notice in the film how aggro Arthur was toward his salad.

Like your sexy suggestion. HMMM, that's all I'm going to say. ^_^

Exciting: OMG, reading my mind. I so badly want someone to do that old "running across the top of the train" sequence. I can't get enough of that. :D

Burning hair is a totally unexpected yet very apt choice. I like it!

Thanks a ton! I'm glad you're liking it. ^_^

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Date: 2011-03-01 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clair3.livejournal.com
omg jack & co r shady ppl! The dude at the window was kinda scary, like supernatural scary lol. Or maybe the flowers r affecting Eames only. I hope nth tobad happens to Eames! (ps: reading this in a restaurant lmao, ppl must be looking at me weird with my weird smile on me face lol)

Date: 2011-03-03 01:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
LOL, eat your delicious restaurant food, you're making me hungry! :)

Good call about the flowers. I'm going to have to give that some thought. Interesting idea!

Thanks! ^_^

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Date: 2011-03-01 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hazysea.livejournal.com
This is so great, Tabi!

I don't have any suggestions at the moment, but I can't wait for the next installment :D

Date: 2011-03-03 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Thanks so much either way! OMG, your icon makes me want to pat his widdle head. Poor Arthur, so put-upon. *patpat* :D

Date: 2011-03-01 10:13 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I hope they stop somewhere in mongolia. Or Irkutsk! The link calls the city the "Paris of Siberia" plus a goggle search tells me that lake Bakial next to it is the deepest lake in the world!

Date: 2011-03-03 01:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Great! I'm going to copy/paste that and do some googling on it. :D Thanks!

Date: 2011-03-01 10:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrow-hubris.livejournal.com
I think you can be faithful to the route of the train. You don't have to write every stop but wouldn't they be on their way to Kazan at this time?

something spooky: I want the rest of Dinclusin's gang to hover around Arthur while Dinclusin tries to kind of take away Eames for some reason. Like they're blocking for Dinclusin and Arthur gets super bad vibes and vague eerie non-verbal non-gestured just emotional warnings from them. And possibly starts seeing them out of the corners of his eyes all around the train. (I'm thinking Paranoia)

something sexy: I second the idea of them having sexy times in front of the window as scenery rushes past. Or I like the idea of after super fancy cocktails (where both are super dressed up) Arthur can't control his new possessiveness (protectiveness?) and it translates into him needing to jump Eames' bones. They go through the whole ruining coiffed hair, fussing with suspenders and cuff links, can't get undressed fast enough because of amazing suits, sex.

something exciting? On their stop touring the Kremlin Fortress they see an old enemy/somebody they both know and dislike and have to duck out and make it back to the train quickly and discreetly. IDK the spooky stuff is more exciting to me I think.

Dinclusin guy: I kind of get the "One of us" vibe off this group. Like they fit more with Arthur's style, but they're going after Eemes' because of his upbringing/breeding etc.

How about a scent you'd like written into the story? I'd love you to work in break pads/burning metal into this. Like when the breaks are working overly hard and it just gives this awful smell. I can see it coming up in a nightmare/spooky time where it's a warning of disaster but doesn't actually happen. Like one of them smells it and is fearful about the train somehow but it's not real.

Any more likes you'd like to hear that I could attempt to write in? Maybe since Arthur is from CA and doesn't like the cold a reverse of my suggestions before.

"This, Eames, is not what I had in mind when I thought of vacation. I think my fingers are turning black."

"Stop being so dramatic Darling, it's not even below zero."

"Below zero? Temperatures go below zero?!"

Date: 2011-03-03 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Kazan, okay! I did a little googling on that. :)

I really really like your "spooky" idea. Copy'pasting that sucker.

Ooooh, and a second for the sexytimes scene. Hmm. :)

Good call on your observation of Dinclusin and his crew. I'm kind of playing around with the "one of us" thing but TBH, I'm not sure who fits where as yet. It does sort of feel like that though, right?

Brake pads and burning metal, interesting! I like the combinations I'm getting.

I like your suggestions! Snagging a few. Thanks! :D

Date: 2011-03-01 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayden-brooks.livejournal.com
something exciting

Dinclusin - He owns the company they booked the tour with.

Scent - Vanilla

Date: 2011-03-03 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Very interesting! I think you're also the second person to say "vanilla." Nice! Copy/pasting. Thanks! ^_^

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Date: 2011-03-01 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Sorry to hear about your friends/family health woes Tabs. RL can be a bitch. Hang in there and thanks for the fic, I love it!!

I think you're up to something with the names because they sound different to my ears.

Date: 2011-03-03 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. I'm glad you like the fic, too. :D

Hmm, I might be up to something with the names. ^_^

Date: 2011-03-01 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweetsigh.livejournal.com
Hey, Sweetie. I do hope your loved ones get better soon. It's always a stressful time when people you love are in the hospital.

Something spooky: Dolls. Duh, because those little things are creepy. They can even just be sitting on a gift shop shelf staring at one of them with their beady little eyes. Or worse, they can be Clown-Dolls.

Something sexy: Well, you said you didn't want anything too explicit, so how's this-- pressed in a dark back corner but in a public place, snogging, biting, rubbing. OR because there should be sexy things other than our boys (else the world would be very sad and dull), a woman in a scandalous dress sitting in someone's lap. It can be one of them, another man, or another woman (eh, I'm bi and unafraid. sue me).

Something exciting: Train surfing! It's hard, it's terrifying, and it's fucking awesome. (my cousins were a bad influence on me.)

Scent: Well, they're in the Great White, so describe the smell of the ice/snow/wind around them!

Sound: I'm still sticking with Mr. Pinstripe Suit.

Dinclusin-- Eames' childhood enemy that he long forgot about? And who turned into a criminal or a spy that after him?
(I see what you did thar with the names.)
Did you know while being pressed down by stones and being accused witchcraft, all he said was "More Weight"? I suppose you know that already though. XD

XOXO
S.S.

PS,
Uh, when you copy/pasted my quote, it didn't get the strike as well. Just a note. o3o

Date: 2011-03-03 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. Yep, times are a bit rough but, fandom makes me smile! ^_^

Dolls are spooky as hell. I'll see what I can do there. I really like your sexytimes suggestion. I might be able to put that in down the line, or at least I hope so. :)

You're the second person to suggest train-surfing or at least being on top of the train. I'm going to have to try to figure that in for sure!

Still thinking of your song suggestion, too. :) Gonna try to work on that.

Very interesting about Dinclusin! You know, I had no idea about that. Hmm. ^_^ You're onto something with that.

Again, thanks! ^_^

Date: 2011-03-01 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twilightthief.livejournal.com
I love this so much.

Love the title too!

Im also sorry to hear about your RL issues. I hope it all works out. Dont worry about taking longer. It's all well worth the wait and you just keep on doing what you're doing.

Thanks so much for including the pocket watch! I wasn't expecting Arthur to get one from Eames but that's even better than what I imagined.

And you did include some intimate moments! The touches to Eames' back and looking out for his well being and telling him if he needs anything that he's on the top bunk. Heh-totally love it.

It was creepy and intimate and believable as always.

I think this Dinclusin guy is definitely interested in Eames but not just for his looks. I think he's trying to sway Eames over to his company or "society" as Eames called it, probably something for some sort of job either for forging or not. Maybe a competing dream extraction team? I think Dinclusin knows about Eames' reputation and is trying to win him over/con him somehow.

I'd like to see either Arthur or Eames like lightly stroke/massage the back of the other's neck like when they're seated or maybe the back of their calf in a: "I'm letting you know I'm here" warm gesture, just like a little touch to let the other know that they're there or they care or whatevs.

Id like to see something from Eames' past come up (maybe from Dinclusin or that Dromalius chick). Like they know something about Eames that even Eames or Arthur doesnt know which can play back into the card game that they played on the train when they first met.

Anyway-long comment is long. Keep up the great work!

Edited Date: 2011-03-01 10:29 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-03-03 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Thanks, re: real life stuff. It's very sucky. Your kinds words do mean a lot. :D

Glad you like it! And I'm glad you like the title, too. I've been looking for an excuse to title something that for months. :D

I really liked the pocketwatch suggestion!

You're a bit right about Dinclusin, in a way. I think? Again, I'm not sure of him yet. I just have vague ideas myself.

Mmmm, I like your intimate gestures suggestion too. You know what's funny? Even before you wrote that, I was thinking, "scalp massage." Hehe.

I love love love the idea that those people know something about Eames that even Eames doesn't know. Copy/paste!

Thanks, again! ^_^

Date: 2011-03-02 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mydeerfriend.livejournal.com
Aww, I'm so sorry to hear about your RL stuff Tabi, I know how crap it is when stuff like that just all happens at once. Hang on in there <3

No suggestions from me this time round, I'm just enjoying the ride =)

Date: 2011-03-03 01:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for that. It does happen all at once, right? It's stranger than fiction, it really is.

Anyway, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! It's fun to write. I'm open to suggestions after the next chapter, too. :D

Again, thanks! ^_^

Date: 2011-03-02 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skyvehicle.livejournal.com
Aw yay, chapter two! Yay Arthur peeking down over the bunk beds! I really enjoyed this part, with Eames getting caught up in this weird elitist shit, and Arthur getting left behind to chill with the coolest 15 year old on the train, I'll bet (if not the only 15 year old, so girl's GOT to represent. ;)

Well, Kazan's got to be the next stop, and that fortress sounds pretty badass. And I'm thinking there's a reason Dinclusin is on the train, and it goes beyond just wanting to see the sights. Maybe he's after Eames? Maybe he's after Arthur and using Eames to get to him and throw their guard off?

And I hope your RL stuff turns around. I'm sorry to hear that things are so rough right now. Sending my love to you, love and badassery.

Date: 2011-03-03 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
I'm really glad you liked Michelle; I think I want to use her again in the plot. :)

Kazan, okay, I'm researching that a bit, so I hope that works out. I like all your ideas about Dinclusin. Some of them I think are on the mark. In fact, you might be directly on it, I think. Hmm. Going to have to give that some thought. :D

Thanks so much for sending me those good thoughts and badassery. ^_^ Very much appreciated! *hug*

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Date: 2011-03-02 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] efcia.livejournal.com
Ok, I might be not exactly understable, as life caught me and suddenly there's a lot of things to do. Anyway- as always a good chapter, even though (oh this cruel honesty) not the best of those you wrote. But good nontheless. All this stolen gifts were both funny and cute. Even though it's somehow hard for me to imagine Arthur actually stealing something, even if it's only chocolates.
Hmm, this guy... I don't know really, but he seems to me as a kind of "shadow" from Eames past. I'm not telling that Eames is cheating Arthur and he knows this guy, not at all, but I have this vague feeling that he knows something more about Eames, something Arthur isn't aware of. He really shouldn't be so sure that there's no secret about Eames he'd like to know...
I don't really know.
Best wishes for everybody! It's always like that, when one person goes to hospital, suddenly, before you realise, there's five more person ill. Well, life.
Did I make any sense? I feel like my brain melted long time ago and right now it's a wet spot somewhere on the floor...
Oh, and as for the scent- I love vanilla scent. Any possibility it'll find its place in this story?
Looking forward for next chapter!

Date: 2011-03-03 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
You're perfectly understandable! I know what you mean about real life kind of broadsiding you. Same thing is going on with me. So sorry!

You're so right about this chapter; it's definitely not one of the best. I wonder, is it the pacing that's off? It reads too slow, maybe? I think that's what it may be. I'm going to try to pick it up and make it more interesting in the next one. :D

I like the idea of a shadow from Eames's past. You're definitely not the first one to think that, so you're on to something there, and I like it.

You're also like the 3rd person who said vanilla. :D Popular scent! I'll definitely try.

Also, thanks for the well-wishes, it means a lot. You're too right about real life / hospitals. When sorrows come, etc. :) But, that's what fandom is for, to have fun and try to relax. ^_^

Date: 2011-03-02 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] osaki-nana-707.livejournal.com
Something spooky and sexy...

Also, I would get unbelievable giggles if Arthur's making good on his promise to Eames and right in the middle something crazy happens, leading to unfinished business, awkwardness, and shenanigans.

Date: 2011-03-03 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
Hehe, awkward shenanigans! I'm going to see if I can fit that in! Possibly not in the next chapter (which is maybe a little weird,) but perhaps down the road. :)

Thanks a ton! ^_^

Date: 2011-03-02 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xkatchy.livejournal.com
Loving this so far! I even like the creepiness (and I wasn't as freaked out as in your last fic, lol!) =P I actually really would like it if Eames continued to see/feel creepy things. Other things... hmm. It'd be cute if at some point Arthur manages to roll off and out of his bunk and Eames either makes him sleep on the bottom together or switch. And a snowball fight at one of the stops would be cute, too. As for Dinclusin - I keep picturing him in a top hat lol. And I think he should know more about Arthur and/or Eames than he really should. Like, knows them from previous but they don't know him.

Date: 2011-03-03 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sho-no-tabi.livejournal.com
I like the idea of them both seeing/feeling creepy things (sounds funny when I put it that way. "Arthur, I felt a creepy thing!" LMAO!)

You're like the thousandth person to suggest that Dinclusin knows them but they don't know him. I really, really like that idea. I think you're all onto something with that.

Arthur falling out of his bunk, I like that, too! Interesting. :D

Okay, I'll see what I can do. Thanks! ^_^

Date: 2011-11-02 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bradwellyjo.livejournal.com
great post as usual!

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